The turtle goes back to it's shell.
sneak,peak,thumb!
The turtle goes forward.The turtle goes into water.
Wush,swush,go!
The turtle goes to swim.Wush,swush,zoom!
The turtle goes faster.
Wush,swush,prr.
The turtle come out of the water.
Squish,squash,splat!
the turtle touches the sand hardly.
Squish,squash,yeah!
The turtle goes to it's home.Sneak,peak,back.
The turtle goes back to it's shell.
Sneak,peak,zzz.
The turtle goes to sleep.
The turtle never gives up.
The turtle is slow,but he don't stop.
The turtle would do it again tomarrow.
And this is the turtle's voiage.
Rachel, good job! The image in your post clearly shows that the turtle never gives up. Through turtule, you gave a good message that time and effort matter in the end. It was very interesting to read your ode. There are some spelling mistakes but you could improve it! -TA Hyebin
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